Veggie Tales Parody: Neon Ceiling comic page 5

Then, she kicked her right foot, fall to her knees and then lay down on the carpet. In the kitchen, Carrie Miller took out the bag of miso soup from the shopping bag, look at the window and called out, "Your father's here." She then smirked and rolled her eyes. She added, "Absolutely on time..."

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This is the fifth live action/animated comic page of Veggie Tales Parody: Neon Ceiling which is a VeggieTales retelling or remake version of this 1971 original film, "Neon Ceiling which was directed by Frank Pierson.

None of some people watch it before and it's an old drama movie which is my favorite because of Denise Nickerson is my favorite child actress. She was beautiful and young for a brunette girl like her with long hair and bangs.

If you never heard and watch this movie, here so you'll watch this whole movie. [link]

Though, I made it into a similar, but different adaptation version of this old live-action film.

Here's the cast:

Charles Pincher the Scallion as Jones the owner of cafe and an artist (in the place of Gig Young)

Esther the Onion (Veggie Tales episode, "Esther The Girl Who Became Queen") as Paula's mother, Carrie Miller (in the place of Lee Grant)

Me (in the place of Denise Nickerson) as Paula Miller

Larry the Cucumber (in the place of Herb Edelman) as Harry

Dustin Wood aka Skullzproductions as Harry extra

Mr. Nezzer as Paula's father, Doctor Miller (in the place of William Smithers)

Archibald "Archie" Asparagus as Ferris Wheel Man

Bob the Tomato as Highway Patrolman

Make kind, nice, respectful, polite or positive comments please. Also, no mean/negative comments, no critiques or criticisms, no trolls, no offense, no suggestions, no flames and no strong inappropiate language like with the "F" word because it makes me sad or angry, my creativity has no limits and this is IMPORTANT TO ME!!! Only I can make a self critique. If you don't like this art or whatever, you don't have to post a comment and keep those words to yourself!

But I need at least a fair critique. For example: "Criticized by - As for your attempt at a baggy shirt, I HIGHLY recommmend starting off with drawing the actual body of whoever you're drawing FIRST, then you draw the clothes. Try looking for clothing and anatomy tutorials here on dA to help you out."

Not mean, rude critiques like this "Your style looks awful and I hate it!"

You can help me with my writing and grammar with critiques so I can let some of my friends edit my writing about what are they or any character is doing after they see the comics and actions like Laramie aka VeggieFanGirl did for me at Veggie Hearts, but you can't criticize my drawings. This is my style and also, I used all the styles of the movie creators like Butch Hartman and Arlene Klasky who created the American animated television series, "Rugrats".

Esther the Onion (C) Veggie Tales episode, "Esther...The Girl Who Became Queen" by A Big Idea Production or Entertainment

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