MLP:FiM The Wonderful Witch of Neigh's comic pg 4

(Down there in Ponyville...)

The two mares are Black Heart and Sun Flower: (cowered and back away from Nightmare Moon who chuckled and her eyes glowing white)

Me: (suddenly fell onto her head with my butt)

Nightmare Moon and me: (both hit to the ground)

Nightmare Moon: Oof!

The mares: (gasp)

Me: (sit up slowly and rubbed my head) Ow, my head...(look down and saw the unconscious Nightmare Moon who is glowing in a palest blue aura and changed into her beautiful, normal self; Princess Luna. I get off of her and feeling worried) Oh, I'm very sorry about that.

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This is the fourth comic page of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic parody of "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz" and it's called, "The Wonderful Witch of Neigh'" (or MLP:FiM - TWWoN for short.)

When I had a dream in my sleep, I appeared in Ponyville in my same human form and my black-and-white stuffed cat that came to life where I meet all the ponies and this dream is based on "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz." This is an animated/live-action story.

So it inspired me to make My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic parody of the Wonderful Wizard of Oz story and it's called, "The Wonderful Witch of Neigh's." It is my adaptation of it, though it's gonna be a little different and it has some songs from "The Wiz" and "The Wonderful Wizard of Ha's". It's a mixture of few versions of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. This story will be roleplayed by me and

The Ponyville is in the place of the Munchkinland.

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Cast:

Me aka KristinaD121 as Dorothy Gale in my human form

Twilight Sparkle as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry and Chimera from Ponyville, Equestia

Rarity as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry extra 1 and Rarily from Ponyville the town of Equestia

Rainbow Dash as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry extra 2 and Moonbow Shootingstar from Ponyville, Equestia

My stuffed black and white cat that came to life as Toto the dog

Princess Celestia as Glinda the Good Witch

The Cutie Mark Crusaders: Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloom and citizens of Ponyville as the Munchkins

Princess Luna in Nightmare Mare form as the Wicked Witch of the East (instead of get killed, she got knocked out after I landed on her on the head and she changed back into her good form, Princess Luna)

Queen Chrysalis as the Wicked Witch of the West

Changelings as the Winged Monkeys

Applejack as the Scarecrow and she is called Applestack the Scarecrow Pony and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home

Pinkie Pie as the Tin Man and she is called Clinkie Pie the Tin Pony and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home

Fluttershy as the Lion and she is called Cowerpaw the Cowardly Pony with her messy mane that is puffy as a lion's mane and her tail is messy too and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home (her lion scared us when we arrived and Fluttershy told him not to scare people)

The Mayor of Ponyville as herself who impersonated the Witch of Neigh's

Spike the Dragon as himself and Thorn from Ponyville, Equestia by Lushgreen City

Zecora the Zebra as Lushgreen City's gatekeeper

Princess Mi Amore Cadenza (or Cadence for short) as herself

Trixie Lulamoon the Great and Powerful Magician as herself in the place of the ordinary man who impersonates the Witch of Neigh's extra

Shining Armor as himself

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There will no parents who will took place of Auntie Em and Uncle Henry in my own adaptation and that'll be Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Rarity.

Make kind, nice, respectful, polite or positive comments please and even the fair, tiny critiques. Also, no mean/negative comments, no rude, mean critiques or criticisms, no trolls, no offense, no suggestions, no flames and no strong inappropiate language like with the "F" word because it makes me sad or angry, my creativity has no limits and this is IMPORTANT TO ME!!! Only I can make a self critique. If you don't like this art or whatever, you don't have to post a comment and keep those words to yourself!

But I need at least a fair, small critique. For example: "Criticized by - As for your attempt at a baggy shirt, I HIGHLY recommmend starting off with drawing the actual body of whoever you're drawing FIRST, then you draw the clothes. Try looking for clothing and anatomy tutorials here on dA to help you out."

Not mean, rude, insult critiques like this "Your style looks awful and I hate it!"

You can help me with my writing and grammar with critiques so I can let some of my friends edit my writing about what are they or any character is doing after they see the comics and actions like Laramie aka VeggieFanGirl did for me at Veggie Hearts, but you can't criticize my drawings. This is my style and also, I used all the styles of the movie creators like Butch Hartman and Arlene Klasky who created the American animated television series, "Rugrats".

Note: Sorry about this comic page and coloring. I'm too lazy to clean this whole comic page up so I don't have time for this. It's like I don't have to clean it up entirely anymore because my friends or followers at school told me that I don't need to.

Style, Ponyville at Equestia and Princess Luna aka Nightmare Moon (C) My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic by Lauren Faust at Hasbro Studios

Style on me as a human girl (C)

Black Heart and Sun Flower (C) Peppermint-Breeze

It's a gift for since I put her MLP:FiM OCs in it and I was hoping it would make her happy and doing my best to win her heart. Peppermint-Breeze or Black Heart, I'm very sorry until you blocked me and I was wrong to pester you or something. Just please give me a second chance and I'll do anything to make you feel better and happy.

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