Anime - AAoVHaRM intro opening 1 comic pg 1

Romanji Japanese lyrics version:

(Intro scene starts)

Narrator: Tōkyō no machide wa, konran wa subete no gijutsu ga jinrui o shinryaku suru tame ni kare no jaakuna guntai ni narita gatte iru jaakuna tekuno o kaishi shita. Vu~an Hikari robottomerina: Shikashi, sekai no ni kibō wa arimasu.

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English lyrics version:

(Intro scene starts)

Narrator: In the city of Tokyo, the chaos was started by the evil technomancer who wants all technology to be his evil army to invade humanity. But there are world's two hopes: Van Hikari and Robot Melina.

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This is the first comic page of Anime Adventures of Van Hikari and Robot Melina (or AAoVHaRM for short) intro theme song or intro opening sequence. This new Anime/Manga series featured the main robotic protagonist; Melina the alternated robot counterpart of the real life human Melina Thermopolis who ran away from home to follow her own path and her two supporting human friends: Van Hikari aka VanitasHikari and the spunky, smart, teenaged mechanic girl named Yuzu. Also the main antagonist is Technos the Technomancer.

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Anime/Manga series summmary: A 90 year old scientist woman named Dr. Nell Huskins created her blue, yellow and white humanoid-shaped gynoid (meaning female robot or android) named Melina who looks just like her missing 15 year old human daughter who ran away from home to follow her own path and never come back, except she's blue, white and gold and she is a metallic human-shaped robot with real human hair that was cutted from Nell's long hair which still black despite that she is old. Meanwhile, the human heroic boy named Van Hikari, who lost his portal powers, defeated Technos and won't able to get home to where he belongs so he will be stuck in Tokyo for life unless he needs an machine that could return him to his home. Technos has survived and tries to claim Melina as his own robot minion away from Dr. Nell, but Van arrived to save them from being attacked until Melina awakens after being brought to life by electricity and toss Technos into the waterfalls to his presumed death. Suddenly, her head was struck by a lightning bolt, loses all her memories of her being awakened and defeated Technos and fell into the tree down below from the waterfalls. Dr. Nell confesses to Van that she needs him to take care of Melina because she is 90 years old and also too old to take care of her until she said she believes her home is not safe for her to raise Melina so Van agrees to do whatever it takes to protect her from the evil clutches of Technos with the help of the 17 year old mechanic girl who owns her mechanic store named Yuzu. It will took long enough to protect Melina from Technos, find a way to get Van back to his home once Technos is completely defeated and life will start anew in Tokyo.

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Not mean, rude critiques like this "Your style looks awful and I hate it!"

You can help me with my writing and grammar with critiques so I can let some of my friends edit my writing about what are they or any character is doing after they see the comics and actions like Laramie aka VeggieFanGirl did for me at Veggie Hearts, but you can't criticize my drawings. This is my style and also, I used all the styles of the movie creators like Butch Hartman and Arlene Klasky who created the American animated television series, "Rugrats".

Note: Sorry about this comic page and coloring. I'm too lazy to clean this whole comic page up so I don't have time for this.  It's like I don't have to clean it up entirely anymore because my friends or followers at school told me that I don't need to.

It took me 5 hours and 30 minutes to draw on those layers, characters, background and this whole digital comic page at Adobe Flash Professional CC which is better than Adobe Illustrator which I'm having hard time with it. Luckily, I traced the digital drawing over my traditional comic page I scanned it to my computer. It's hard to add the shadings, lightings and shadows for me to practice with depends on the different directions of light source or something.

Roleplay by me and 

An intro song, "Yes! All My Family!" sung by Cute the Japanese Pop girl band

Dr. Nell Huskins and Robot Melina Thermopolis (C) Me

Van Hikari, Yuzu the Mechanic Girl and Technnos the Technomanceer (C) VanitasHikari

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